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3960x3240px 7.38 MB
Make
NIKON
Model
COOLPIX L120
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/11.9
Focal Length
15 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Apr 27, 2012, 10:58:33 AM
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Stunning capture! You certainly managed to capture a beautiful moment.
I'll break this right into pros and cons.
PROS:
-Action is captured on the flower.
-Water droplets are clear, subject is in focus.
-Water droplets in the background have motion blur, which focuses on the subject.
-Pretty good composition! This would look pretty nice in a frame. Maybe a slight crop to shift the flower to the side, but no complaints here!!
CONS:
-Colour. The white balance is way off. You lose a lot of the beautiful reds and greens in the flower petals and leaves in the background. You could have warmed it up without sacrificing blues in the water droplets.
-Could use a little bit of sharpening.
-The black point is off, making the photo look really foggy and uncontrasty, you can correct this with the levels tool pretty easily!
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