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Submitted: April 6, 2012
Image Size: 7.9 MB
Resolution: 4032×3240
Submitted with: Sta.sh

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Make:NIKON
Model:COOLPIX L120
Shutter Speed:1/60 second
Aperture:F/13.9
Focal Length:27 mm
ISO Speed:200
Date Taken:Mar 6, 2012, 10:43:25 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS5.1 Windows

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Refreshed for Summerby !Hunter-Arkaman

Photography / Still Life / Food and Drink

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Critique by *sannamy May 2, 2012, 12:35:28 AM

this is a great capture.... the image is perfectly freeze (the backtround is blurry, but that because you focus in the subject for make contrast), but without lose dynamism... your selection of cold colors was obviusly intensional (most people uses a yellow lemon, being it more livelly and simbolic of summer, but does not reflect necesary "Refreshed"... so being you able to simbolize bot topics, you just chooe one... what's makes me think again about if is correct or not...), the Simetry is right... maybe wih more focus in the upper part (to make it perfect... but that could compromise the composition overcharging it... so is right this way)

However the most important thing in this shot are: composition, color, dynamism, the focussed selection and the contrast betwenn the elements (not for his colors as for his focuss)

pos: Originality will be low... because water and lemon are too obvious... however... you choose green intead of yellow.. that makes me raise the rate a little.

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